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Charnwood Farm - Bryan Page Bryan Page lives in
the market town of Loughborough in Charnwood. He is an accomplished illustrator
with a special interest in historical re-construction. It is a great pleasure
to walk an area with him, and to hear him interpret the signs of human impact
on the built and natural environment. It is magical to watch him 'raise the walls'
and recreate the life and times of these places with the tip of a pencil! Now
retired from teaching, Bryan devotes much of his time to his own projects. He
is a regular collaborator with Charnwood Arts. The kukai images (without haiku)
can be accessed by clicking here: an'ya, from the US, acted as the judge of haiku in this section.
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1st Place - Marjorie Buettner grape vines I chose this haiku because
of its clarity of images, hidden depth, and the purity of its feeling. Truly,
'summer love' can overtake anyone, and the image of the grape vines gives me a
vision of young lovers entwined in an embrace. As for the wire fence, it could
easily be representative of rigid boundaries imposed on their relationship. Although
there was no actual mention of the farm house in Bryan's painting, perhaps we
can imagine it was a 'summer house' somewhere in Europe, and this haiku does well
nonetheless, by combining a human element with a nature counterpart. [AP] 2nd Place - Mary Angela
Nangini no trespassing It could be said of this
particular haiku, that its middle line contains an interesting pivot. There is
also juxtaposition between the vines and the barbed wire as they wind around and
through each other, one being soft, and the other being hard. In this haiku, man
is warned not to 'trespass', but the vines get away with it. Possibly a 'picture
sort of haiku,' yet I feel that it does do justice to Bryan's artwork, and vice-versa.
[AP] 3rd Place - Doris Kasson beyond This is my third choice,
and its author wrote exactly what he/she perceived from Bryan's lovely farm painting.
It is quite straightforward and accurate in its portrayal, but also could just
as easily stand on its own. [AP] |