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Enchanted Wave - Peter Miller Peter Miller is an artist/printmaker based in Japan and exhibiting work internationally. Peter Miller's webpage Sue Mill is a haijin living in Australia. Sue Mill's webpage
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1st Place - Stephen Amor land's end I liked this because the
photo inspired it; it was not merely a description of what was seen. It allows
the reader to create his/her own images. It is well structured with the fragment-phrase
format. [SM] 2nd Place - Kirsty Karkow tawny sunshine-- This used an unusual word
to describe the sunshine. One has to be careful when using original ideas, but
it can strengthen a haiku greatly if the chosen word is apt. I liked too, the
assonance in lines one and two. [SM] 3rd Place - Rosemarie Helen
Moore a broken fence- This one does stay close
to the photo, but is strong enough to stand alone. [SM] |