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Sea Front - Bob Trubshaw
Bob Trubshaw is a Charnwood
based photographer, writer and historian . He specialises in pre-Roman and pre-Christian
history, life, customs and practices in Britain. He is also actively involved
in Charnwood Arts as an observer to the Board of Trustees. Bob's photographic
work involves much experimentation and painstaking photo-manipulation. Many of
his black and white images were taken over a number of years to document and celebrate
places that he knows and loves -- often re-visiting them a number of times. He
is currently writing a number of books on his specialist subjects. He lives in
the Charnwood village of Wymeswold.
Alison Williams, from
the UK, judged the haiku sent in response to his images. She had a difficult job
finding a 1, 2 , 3 -- and thought that all were 'winners.
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1st Place - Chibi
the empty beach
holds an empty bench...
sea spray
The idea of something empty,
containing something else that is also empty, is intriguing and a little paradoxical,
as many of the best haiku are. A double emptiness. Then, out of all of this emptiness,
something insubstantial reaches out and touches us -- sea spray -- a very well
chosen third line. An interpretation that captures the chill, bleak mood well,
and takes it beyond the visual by bringing in the sense of touch implied by the
spray. The structure is deceptively simple -- the scene set in line one, an added
item of interest in line two and then the surprise of the last line. Both form
and content are very well done. [AW]
2nd Place - Juanito Escareal
storm-tossed waves...
the photographer retreats
to higher ground
This haiku clearly describes
the tension that we all feel in such
settings between being drawn to the violence of the sea, and being suitably respectful
of its power. We want to be close enough to capture it in a photograph (or a haiku),
but on high enough ground to feel safe. Like many of the best haiku, it shows
humanity in a way that recognises our relationship to the forces of nature. The
chosen wording is precise and clear, and nothing distracts from the appreciation
of the moment. [AW]
3rd Place - Ron Moss
spring tide-
almost visiting
a seaside bench
A good economy of words
and a wonderfully appropriate ambiguity. Is it the spring tide, or the writer
or both that are almost visiting the bench? I imagine that the writer was thinking
of going to his usual bench until he saw that the waves were almost reaching it.
This bench is probably a favourite place to sit and watch the sea on fine days,
but it is still too early in the year. An interesting seasonal interpretation
of the picture. [AW]

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