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 WHC - TREETOPS HAIKU


HAIKU Selections
Ferris Gilli, Editor

 

November 2002

school in session
spiders return to
the tree house

Carmel C. Lively
Arizona, USA

golden leaves
an old woman smiles
at the bicycle in a tree

Carol Sircoulomb
Kansas, USA

leaves in the creek --
the footbridge sways
at the middle

DeVar Dahl
Alberta, CA

crabs moving slowly
through the cattails...
autumn night

Carol Raisfeld
New York, USA

Halloween
a charm of goldfinches
in the witch hazel

kirsty karkow
Maine, USA

early morning
the beggar's hat
soft with dew

Rosa Clement
Amazonas, BR

November chill --
a barefoot man waits
for the northbound ferry

Billie Wilson
Alaska, USA

winter solstice
colored lights connect
all the neighbors

an'ya
Oregon, USA

a new year
my ears ring in
the silence

Darrell Byrd
California, USA

evening news
the smell of bourbon
in her tea

Darrell Byrd
California, USA

dark night--
the soft hiss
of falling snow

Mary Lee McClure
Indiana, USA

sleepless--
city lights passing        
beyond the train window

Jasminka Nadaskic Djordjevic
Smederevo,YU

river mist
empty Ferris-wheel cars 
creak in the breeze

Sue Mill
Brisbane, AU

butterfly on the poppy --
a cat's back arches       
above tall grass

Jasminka Nadaskic Djordjevic
Smederevo,YU

cat ears
between freesias . . .
the robin drops a berry

Maria Steyn
Johannesburg, RSA

sunrise . . .
from the robin's beak
a shimmer of insect wings

Maria Steyn
Johannesburg, RSA

just a stone's throw
from the frog pond --
toad lilies

hortensia anderson
New York, USA

kapok tree
the boy tells everyone
home is nearby

Rosa Clement
Amazonas, Brazil

crows gather
behind the combine
thunder clouds

paul conneally
Loughborough, UK

come daybreak --
a moat formed around
the nesting crane

an'ya
Oregon, USA

sun on my back --
my tethered shadow floats
among the algae

hortensia anderson
New York, USA

remembering him . . .
fragrant white blossoms
at my front gate

Gillena Cox
Trinidad, WI

Kamakura mist
a red bird rests
in Buddha's palm

Allen McGill
San Miguel de Allende, MX

showing my mom
where the caterpillar took a bite
honeysuckle

Willow Katsumi Relf
California, USA

birthday gift -
the puppy looks back
at its mother

Carol Raisfeld
New York, USA

cricket at the gate -
stars hang thick
in the willow

Carol Raisfeld
New York, USA

skipping stones~
a daddy longlegs
rides the ripples

Kathi Rudawsky
Florida, USA

coarse shale path
the old couple's poodle
hops on three legs

DeVar Dahl
Alberta, CA

windless day
the permanent lean  
of coastal trees

Dominique Chipot
Lorraine, France

morning stillness
a badger waddles from
the hog shed

Darrell Byrd
California, USA

grandma's hands -
the flutter of eagle feathers
as we dance

suhni
Oklahoma, USA

gnats swarm up
my raised arm
twilight haze

H. Gene Murtha
New Jersey, USA

starry night -
reeds bow
in a loon's wake

H. Gene Murtha
New Jersey, USA

sun-baked granite --
a rattlesnake
leaves its skin

John Barksdale
California, USA

desert afternoon
moving with the shade
of a cactus

Michael Ketchek
New York, USA

solstice
a pair of snails mate  
in broad daylight

Juanito Escareal
California, USA

patio door
a lizard peeks in
through cold glass

Juanito Escareal
California, USA

quiet boardwalk -
only gulls strut past
the hookers

suhni
Oklahoma, USA

dirty dishes
on the counter a housefly
washes itself

an'ya
Oregon, USA

summer rain --
a scent of cedar
fills the cabin

Anita Wintz
California, USA

lake sunrise
the red reflection     
of a Shinto shrine

Allen McGill
San Miguel de Allende, MX

summer's end
the picnic hamper and Dad
surrounded by sheep

paul conneally
Loughborough, UK

unseasonable rain
the old door
opens with ease                           

semi (Terrie Relf)
California, USA

eroded creek
tree roots cling
to nothing

Sue Mill
Brisbane, AU

last yard sale
crooked fingers linger
on the dollhouse

kirsty karkow
Maine, USA

Thanksgiving Day       
he feeds the one-legged bird
from his wheelchair

Victor P. Gendrano
California, USA

 

grandma's lap -
we trace rainbows inside
an abalone shell

suhni
Oklahoma, USA
USA

Next: TREETOPS HIGHLIGHTS


Guidelines for submitting to TREETOPS:

Submissions extend to anyone who is a member of the World Haiku Club; i.e., any member of WHC may submit poems to TREETOPS. Selections are made on merit. The number of haiku published are limited and may be dictated by the quality of submissions. Haiku selections will appear on the TREETOPS HAIKU page, and one haiku of special merit will be chosen from submissions by the editor for commentary to appear on the TREETOPS HIGHLIGHTS page.

Submit original, unpublished haiku (haiku that have not previously appeared in print journals or in on-line journals by editorial selection). Poems that have appeared on Internet mailing lists such as WHChaikuforumworkshop, WHCschools, WHCbeginners, and the Shiki lists, but have not otherwise been published, are eligible.     

Poets may send up to ten haiku in each submission.

When submitting, put "TREETOPS SUBMISSION" in the subject block of your email.

Follow criteria for haiku according to the Hibiscus School.  Essential elements of haiku:

Focus
Conciseness (clarity, brevity)
Effective juxtaposition
Resonance
Immediacy
Natural syntax
Common language
Balance of humanity and nature
Sense of mood
Sense of season; kigo
Concrete imagery

Freshness of content is desirable. Poems should avoid stale, hackneyed presentations of overused subjects. NOTE: This does NOT mean that familiar subjects and topics are unwelcome. It simply means that whatever the topic, the haiku should present a fresh, different view of a subject or event, and/or offer new insight to the reader.

DEADLINE for TREETOPS SUBMISSIONS for March 2003 Issue:

January 28, 2003

SEND HAIKU SUBMISSIONS to Ferris Gilli hgilli@cfl.rr.com.

(Please do NOT send submissions to the school, or to any other WHC list.)


Next: Read TREETOPS HIGHLIGHTS, Ferris Gilli's  selection of one haiku for comment.

 


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