FREE VERSE..............
Larry Kimmel, US

 

Two Worlds

Here, in the afternoon, the forgotten
herb garden, the broken sundial,
seem timeless and content in ruin.
Over there, beyond the hedge,

lies a parking lot that seems
to thrive on agitation.
Two worlds, my love, two worlds a step
apart, knowing nothing of one

another. I brought you here to show
you something for which I haven't
words, hoping you might have the words,
yet here we stand, a step apart,

in silence. Well then, let's move on—
we mustn't linger here in doubt.

Visiting Poet

With a silent movie’s flicker on an aster sky,
the starlings wheel St. Mary's spire, tilt,
so that, like Venetian blinds, you see less
of them. Later (after espresso at

The Rubáiyát), the ivy walls screechscreech
screechscreech like rusty cot springs. Can you see
even one among the leaves? And in
an alleyway of old brick walls, zapped

by lightning fire escapes, against a gust
of burger-scent and grime, I make a lantern
of my fist. Get grit in eye. Cigarette lit.
And see behind a dingy windowpane

one red geranium. And later still,
the clean-edged roofs against an orchid sky.

Speculation #1

outside the concert hall, after The Photographer,
Glass shattered by a taxi's blare.

at the reception,
a tinkle of ice in cocktail glasses, as across
the room a woman lifts her wine glass
at the very moment I lift mine—world wide,
how many others? and what might Philip
be doing this very moment—wherever?

later,
in the square, a frozen fountain, still able, spirts
a little, making of itself an ice palace.
“old age, uncertain as an icy road”

once,
walking winter streets passed
yellow window shades, the perfect female profile
- happened!

once,
outside a Fasching party on Gaisberg,—stars
the size of Christmas lights—think of it!

to have been Mohr & Gruber, to have written
Silent Night

NOTES : "Speculation #1"- Larry Kimmel....



First, "The Photographer" is a musical work by the contemporary composer Phillip Glass. Hence "Glass" in the 2nd line and in upper case, and again the mention of "Phillip" in the 7th line.

Fasching is the period of carnival in Germany/Bavaria from mid-February to mid-March. For more on that I've included the URL below.

KARNEVAL-FASTNACHT-FASCHING

Gaisberg is one of the mountains near Salzburg, Austria.

Joseph Mohr gave the poem Silent Night (Stille Nacht) to Franz Xavier Gruber, who composed the melody for Silent Night.

As for a bit of background for this poem, I'd like to point out that it is made of a number of fragments, which grew out of haiku and senryu attempts that seemed to me to be too metaphoric for those genres. The poem grew then from the initial image of what it is like to come out of a concert and have the meditative mood of the music 'shattered' by the street noise, here expressed as the blare from a single taxi.

There is a reception afterward, and there are some observations and reflections the protagonist makes at this gathering. After which, he seems to be out walking (probably home) through a wintry urban (probably a small town) landscape. And it seems that seeing the 'ice palace' fountain, causes him to have further reflections, or reminiscences, as he walks.

It is my hope that the final leap "think of it! / to have been Mohr & Gruber ... etc." has the feeling, somewhat, of a non sequitur, though it is obvious enough that thinking of stars the size of Christmas tree lights would suggest this. And here we have begun with the sophisticated work of Phillip Glass and ended with Silent Night, a simple lyric and tune, but famous worldwide, (written in 1816). And what more could an artist want than to write something that has lasted nearly 200 years and is known worldwide. And yet when Mohr and Gruber created this work, they probably had no idea of its importance, they were simply trying to supply a need for a Christmas service, a planned service that couldn't go forward because the organ was broken and they would only have voices and a guitar to work with.

This and other ideas in the poem have long fascinated me, such as the lifting of a glass at the same time as someone across a room; I'm always wondering how many people are doing this or that at the same moment. There are nearly 6 billion of us on the planet right now, after all. And also, the idea of what any particular person, such as a celebrity, might be doing at any particular moment. Take a famous person and think, what is so-and-so doing right now. Sleeping. Arguing. Brushing their teeth. More and likely it will be some simple, everyday thing that all of us do.

NOTES concerning "Speculation #1"- Conrad DiDiodato......

What I admire most in Larry's poem is its imagistic flare for conveying, in verse after verse, the temporal, the ephemeral nature of events, while keeping intact a sense of their simultaneity, spontaneity. Caught in the poem's elegant crystal pattern, persons and places, "a woman [who] lifts her wine glass", "The Photographer", "outside the concert hall", "later,/in the square", all overlap in a generous narrative outpouring. I like the postmodernist feel of this poem, too: I particularly like the way it seems to shatter at a touch and that is its greatest virtue.

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