A STUDY OF TRUE SENRYU (PART II):.............
FRAGMENTARY OBSERVATIONS (1)

What's So Funny? —
A bird's eye view of humor in senryu from Chick N.
Lyttle

....I am thankful for laughter except when milk comes out of my nose.
                —Woody Allen


Hey there, I'm a hungry li'l hatchling, full of 'pith and vinegar', as you can see from my photograph—and if you think I look funny, you ought'a see yourself from my vantage point! Ha! Maybe I was born yesterday, but my ancestors were dinosaurs, while yours just monkeyed around during the great devolution: the survival of the unfittest (And if evolution is true, somebody or something had to have had a sense of humour to do such a thing to our Jurassic predecessors...Ouch! Something just hit me in the head...the sky must be falling! You gotta watch out for those assteriods. Just look what happened to those guys back then!

How do you spell humour? I spell it s-e-n-r-y-u. If you're a Westerner, try pronouncing that for a tongue-twister and you can even make the Japanese laugh! Senryu is more or less all about humour, isn't it? Oh, didn't you know? Well, I'm sorry but that's a fact, Jacques! True, there are unfunny senryu which have UGACHI (see PART I of this study). Even then, senryu with UGACHI would be much better if humour were found there, too. I might go so far as to say that UGACHI is a form of humour—even if it is not for the unsophisticated. Or, shall we just say that UGACHI is a sense of humour in disguise? In other words, you really cannot write something serious and call it a UGACHI senryu. (You dig?)

In fact, in nine cases out of ten, humour is present in all kinds of senryu if you know where to look. If you can't find it, don't come to me—you need an appointment with a good optometrist. No, I don't have an attitude problem...but you might have a perception problem. As the lazy man's guru, Thaddeus Golas said, Inside yourself or outside, you never have to change what you see, only the way you see it.

On the other hand, universal-hitchhiker Douglas Adams has warned us: If it looks like a duck, and quacks like a duck, we have at least to consider the possibility that we have a small aquatic bird of the family anatidae on our hands. Well, you see, really, humour is everything! What, may I ask, constitutes a sense of humour? Don't you have a funny bone like we-un's of the feathered tribes? You know, 'birds of a feather...'? (never mind). Think about it: why do you humans laugh in the first place?

If you want a philosophical answer, you might want to go to philosophers such as
Henri Bergson. If you want a psychological answer, I suppose Freud is as good as any, especially if you secretly enjoy the occasional Freudian slip or a snickering slight of pee-pee envy. If you want a scientific answer, you'd best visit your hypothalamus. It's couched somewhere deep in the limbic system, your 'reptilian brain'. Yes, Virginia, even crocodiles have a hypothalamus (probably why their grins are so wide)—chimpanzees laugh and rats giggle. If, by now you don't know by our own behavioral patterns of bluff and mimicry, us bird-brains just want to have fun, too! B
ring home a parrot and you'll find out for yourself (and ol' Henri thought only humans were capable of humor and laughter!). But if you want a really hilarious answer on human laughter from the scientific community, read the following quote from the Journal of the American Medical Association:

December 7, 1984, Journal of the American Medical Association:

Although there is no known`laugh center' in the brain, its neural mechanism has been the subject of much, albeit inconclusive, speculation. It is evident that its expression depends on neural paths arising in close association with the telencephalic and diencephalic centers concerned with respiration. Wilson considered the mechanism to be in the region of the mesial thalamus, hypothalamus, and subthalamus. Kelly and co-workers, in turn, postulated that the tegmentum near the periaqueductal gray contains the integrating mechanism for emotional expression. Thus, supranuclear pathways, including those from the limbic system that Papez hypothesized to mediate emotional expressions such as laughter, probably come into synaptic relation in the reticular core of the brain stem. So while purely emotional responses such as laughter are mediated by subcortical structures, especially the hypothalamus, and are stereotyped, the cerebral cortex can modulate or suppress them. (reference from Wikipedia)

Usually, nothing ruins jokes faster than dissecting and examining them to find out what makes ithem laughable. Yet the funny thing about the above dissertation is that those doctors studying laughter probably wouldn't even have a clue as to what's so funny about the above bit of cerebral 'genus'. Read my head. Like Lorenzo N. Fowler, modern-day JAMA clad phrenologists on the origin and organ of laughter. Go figure. But some food for thought on the religio-answer side: since the limbic system is a throwback to reptiles, does that mean laughter is related to the crafty Genesis snake of Original Sin (hmmm, senryu... sin-r-u )? Could there be laughter without tears? Comedy without tragedy? Possibly, but we'd probably looth motht of our pith if we didn't have our vinegar.

Well, as they say, if you can't see the bright side of life, polish the dull side. To find something truly pithy, or even ridiculously funny, I suggest we look at our question from the viewpoint of your own mundane and ordinary daily life, if only because that's where you can find your best senryu material. For instance, if one day in town you chance to meet someone you know, not once, but twice, you somehow smile or giggle, don't you? Out of embarrassment or surprise? If you meet him/her for the third time you get all in a flap, roll about in paroxysms of laughter and you just can't stop slapping your leg. Why?

Judging from the observations I've made since I was hatched a few days ago, the laughter of you humans seems to be triggered by a huge variety of
rib tickling devices, of which here are just a very few:

  • That which just occurs to one as funny

  • Unfunny things turned funny

  • Bodily secretions, lavatory jokes

  • Anything to do with sex

  • Human failures, mistakes and foibles

  • Differences, deformities, anomalies and abnormalities

  • Similarities, conformities, analogies, imitation and associations

  • Opposites, irony, inconsistencies, contradictions, oxymorons

  • Foolishness, drunkenness, absurdities and slow-wittedness

  • Exaggeration, amplification, outlandish or far-fetched remarks

  • Understatement, euphemisms

  • Personification, mimicry or imitation

  • Pretense, hidden or double meanings, innuendo

  • Allegory, expanded metaphor, personification, anthropomorphism

  • Repetition, mockery

  • Unexpected occurrences and surprises

  • Outwitting or being one step ahead of the listener

  • Tools of the funny trade, i.e. making things funny: pun, play on words, mispronunciations amphibologia (ambivalence of grammatical structure) and other hard-to-pronounce tongue-twisters

  • Antics, and so on...

I'll  be back...so watch the birdie!

—Chick

 

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for more on ugachi, read WHCsenryu Special Feature: BAKUMATSU AND MEIJI UNDERGROUND VERSE FORMS by Professor Dean Brink, US

 
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