A STUDY OF TRUE SENRYU.(PART I): UGACHI (3)
Now a selection of WHCsenryu members' works which I think contain UGACHI
to varying degrees:
[2] WHCsenryu Members' Senryu Works
retirement—
why is youth wasted
on the young
Darrell Byrd, US
breakfast together—
the silence about things
that matter
Carol Raisfeld, US
refurbished soba shop—
tempura prawns have gone smaller
under the chandelier
Shuichi Sakane, JP
getting old
I notice the plum blossoms
after they fall
Richard Krawiec, US
she talks without thinking
he thinks without talking
long, long, winter nights
Eric Houck, Jr., US
lawsuit
over the dog bite—
a burglar
Dave Bacharach, US
his spirit . . .
the last to leave
the funeral
Carol Raisfeld, US
mourning widow—
the candle's tears
dry by morning
Carol Raisfeld, US
discipline problem—
his grandmother meets
with the Principal
Dave Bacharach, US
READ: A STUDY OF TRUE SENRYU, PART II : FRAGMENTARY
OBSERVATIONS (1)
for more on
ugachi, read WHCsenryu Special Feature:
BAKUMATSU AND MEIJI UNDERGROUND VERSE FORMS
by Professor Dean
Brink, US
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